Neo

First off I like the little story you’ve added to this character. Obviously if something rips off your arms, make yourself able to combat the very thing so you can do the same to it- so to speak. The design is very human looking, and you went for that design by incorporating the pistons into the calves and such. Almost techno organic you could say. I do like how you opted to have human feet (similar to Robocop (the original)), and how they possess human like hands, rather than looking like a human clad in robotic armor. The giant armored hands look like a nice touch as well. To accommodate that large arm/shoulder width those 3^rd and 4^th arms need, the hips seem to be widened in order to be able to support that. I like how you took the time to do that.

Overall there isn’t much to go over really. The hand with the cigarette seems to be facing the wrong way. It looks as if the cigarette is pointing down into their inner knuckle, rather than being held outwards. Hands are hard, so there’s no need to go ballistic over it. Judging from the angle, the palm would be facing us, or the side of the hand and pinkie finger would be facing us. The cigarette would be pointing towards or away. Also try giving a much more dramatic color to the cigarette smoke to help it pop out, and maybe a red dot to show the end of where the cigarette is at.

I do like the shading on this, it’s very complicate but you pulled it off the best as you can, especially with such a very complex and intricate design you’ve got going on. The small shines on the metal help make it look metal, and the giant scar over the person’s face is rather nice, adds to the “battle damage” a person might get from having a rough and tough fight with a monster- not to mention the cigarette also adds to that sort of “tough” look one might get after surviving a battle with a strange beast.

Overall you’ve done a good job at helping give your character personality and attitude, as well as make an interesting picture. Great job, and keep up the good work.